YOu pass but
I like the way you drew the char and stuff.. I dont like stick fegures.. its shows that you did put some effort.. but it also show you didnt put enough of it.. things I didnt like about it and needs some improovement are:
1- Music stops with ever speach.. that was annoying.
2- you need some backgounds.. white walls dont do the trick!
3- I prefare voices and movies that dont stop until the user click somewhere..
other then that... I think you are a good artist you can dooo way much better...
Check out my GOthlan cartoon... chap 1 and 2 the graphics are too good.. but currently I am working on chapter 3 and I have advanced graphics there.... your reviews will help me out too :)